STUDENT EXAMPLE #1:
STUDENT EXAMPLE #2:
STUDENT EXAMPLE #3:
Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening
By: Robert Frost
1 Whose woods these are I think I know[A1] .
2 His house is in the village though[A2] ;
4 To watch his woods fill up with snow[A5] .
7 Between the woods and frozen lake[A10]
8 The darkest evening of the year[A11] .
9 He gives his harness bells a shake[A12]
10 To ask if there is some mistake[A13] .
11 The only other sound's the sweep[A14]
14 But I have promises to keep[A20] ,
15 And miles to go before I sleep[A21] ,
16 And miles to go before I sleep[A22] .
In the poem “Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost, a traveler is stopping in the empty woods that are owned by a man who must be powerful. The man who owns the woods also seems to have left the woods alone for a while, and has other important business in the village. The poet has also left you questioning, because he is not telling the reader what his business here is, so the reader’s mood is confused and interested. We can also assume that this traveler’s business is secret, and he is being secretive, because he seems to not want to be seen by the man who owns the woods. The writer also sounds like Jack Frost, because he mentions that he is going to “watch his woods fill up with snow”, which sound like the writer is the one who is going to fill the woods up with snow. The horse being confused that the traveler is stopping tells me that this horse is smart, and knows that they have other business to do. And maybe he has to stop because it is the “darkest evening of the year”. And possibly the reason that it is very quiet and empty is because it is so dark. And the way that he describes the woods as beautiful and “lovely” tells me that he enjoys being here. But because he describes the woods as “deep” he is looking for some lost object. Or many people get lost here because the foliage is so thick. And because he has “promises to keep”, this says that he cannot stay, and that someone is telling him to do this, someone who is also powerful. Or possibly he has “promises to keep” because he has some desire to find something. And he must have already traveled many miles, although he has many to go. His repetition in the last two lines says that he must want to sleep, but can’t. Maybe he is so sleepy that he is not thinking clearly and is repeating things. Overall I think that this poem is supposed to leave you confused, and interested in what the meaning is. That must be why this poem is so popular, it leaves readers confused and searching for more, just like it has for me.
[A1]Who “owns” these woods must be powerful. Maybe even a spirit or higher being. I can infer that the writer has not been in these woods for a very long time. I can also assume the speaker must have a confused tone, and that he is commemorating an event that happened here. (1)
[A2]“He” must not come or notice these woods often. Where he lives he must be busy, and sort of ignore these woods. Maybe this is why the poet is here. And he must be far away. (2)
[A3]The writer must not want to be seen, and is very secretive. He might not be supposed to be here either. And his business is secret, because he in no telling the reader what he is doing. So the readers mood must be: interested and confused. (3)
[A5]This makes me think that the writer is jack frost, because this sentence sounds like the writer is filling the woods with snow. (4)
[A6]He must be a traveler, I can infer that he has come a long way, and is bothered that “He” has not been in these woods. (5)
[A7]This means strange or unusual. So the horse must think it is strange that they are stopping in the middle of a cold forest. (5)
[A9]This assists my thought of it being jack frost, because not everybody can just stop and rest in the middle of the woods at dark. (6)
[A17]Possibly the writer came here for this beauty and peace, and that is why he is staying here. (12)
[A19]Perhaps people get lost here, and he is on a search for someone or something. and he wants to stay. (13)
[A20]I think that he wants to stay, but can't because he is on a search for something. Maybie that is why the horse is confused, it knows that they have other bussiness to do. and someone is making him take this journey, someone who is powerful like the person who owns these woods. (14)
[A21]This shows that he must be on a search for someone or something, and that he has already come many miles. (15)
[A22] I can infer that he wants to sleep, but cant.
STUDENT EXAMPLE #4:
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? (Sonnet 18)
By: William Shakespeare
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day [A1] ?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate[A2] .
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May[A3] ,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date[A4] .
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven [A5] shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed[A6] ;
And every fair from fair [A7] sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course[A8] , untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade[A9] ,
Nor lose possession [A10] of that fair thou ow'st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade[A11] ,
When in eternal lines to Time thou grow'st[A12] .
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see[A13] ,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee[A14] .
In the poem “Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?” by William Shakespeare, the poet’s tone is filled with admiration and passion for a girl. He loves her and compares her to things and settings that are known for their beauty, liveliness, and dreaminess. For example, “Shall I compare thee to a summer's day ?” (1). He is comparing a beautiful sunny day, and lively people laughing and playing under the sun, to the love of his life. He also mentions that her beauty shines through dark times, like a star in heaven. When reading this following line, keep in mind how the poet is referring to the love of his life, and how heaven is known to be a dreamy place, where dreams come true before your eyes. ”… the eye of heaven shines” (5). No matter how much the poet loves her, he doesn’t always think so highly of her. For example, “And every fair from fair sometime declines” (7). He compares her also to a shining star who dims, and sometimes her beauty doesn’t shine as bright, but automatically comes back to life, mentioning how her beauty will never leave her side, and will always linger around her. “But thy eternal summer shall not fade”(9). Though no matter what, the poet still loves her dearly, and thinks highly of her, and wants her spirit to live for eternity, as it does. “So long lives this, and this gives life to thee”(14). Overall, this poet thinks very highly of the fair love of his life.
[A1]I can infer that the poet is referring to a woman that he loves, and thinks she is beautiful. I assume this, because a summer’s day is usually lovely, filled with beauty, as the sun is set high above the horizon. People laugh, and play outside, making the world a happy, and lively place. So, he is comparing a beautiful women which he loves, who is as beautiful as a summers day. I noticed that the first line is the title repeated.
[A2]I just looked up the definition of temperate, and I discovered that it can mean mild, and pleasant. So, basically, he is saying that she is even more lovely then a sunny day, and more pleasant to be around. The poet is talking about this women with much devotion, comparing her to a summers day, and even exclaiming how she is actually better.
[A3]Does this poem take place in may? Maybe he is saying that they do sometimes go through rough times (“rough winds shake the darling buds”). I suppose that he is referring darling buds to the woman he so dearly admires.
[A4]I am not exactly sure what William Shakespeare means in this line, but I can infer that he might be saying that however much time he spent with thee, It seems to zoom by, and he will never spend enough time with thee.
[A5]Don’t take this literally, because heaven doesn’t have eyes (if there is a heaven), and eyes aren’t hot. I am not sure in what context the poet means in “hot” (5). If I were to translate this line, I would write: I see you as a dazzling star from heaven. Usually heaven is thought as a dreamy place, where everything is possible, and wishes come true.
[A6]Here, when the poet says gold complexion, he is talking about the “eye of heaven” (6), which might be a bright star. So basically, he is saying however bright this star (his love) can be, sometimes she dims. However beautiful she is, sometimes her beauty, can fade into the night.
[A7]In the book Romeo and Juliet, which I have been reading, I have often read the word fair. That was the first time I’ve seen that word, but after I looked up this word in the dictionary, I learned that fair can mean beauty. Another way I could write this line would be: And every beauty from beauty sometimes declines. If you know synonyms for words, you can break up the phrase, making it more understandable.
[A8]Nature makes me think of mother nature, so he might be referring to his loved one. I don’t think that in this context it means what I first think, but I will still tell you what I first think. I first think of a girl (“nature”) going through puberty (“changing course”). I don’t think that what I first think would fit in this sentence, because I first thought that Shakespeare was talking about a grown women. Maybe he is talking about mood swings???
[A9]My translation for this line is: even though her beauty may dim once in a while, no matter what, He will still find the beauty in her. It will always linger around her. As I said before, breaking up the sentence, and knowing all of the vocabulary, this complex sentence can transform into come a legible and understandable sentence.
[A10]He must truly love her, as he thinks of her as his: “thou ow’st (10). I might be mistaken, but I thought that ow’st meant my own. Overall, sometimes her beauty may decline, I can never imagine not having her by my side.
[A11]At first, I had trouble understanding this line, but with Ms. Lukins help, I understood that of course she will die at one point or another, and death will brag, when she will stand in his grasp. He must think that what he sees in her, death sees the same beauty that lies in the poet's eyes.
[A12]The poet thinks that she may die, and be in death’s possession, in his heart, as time passes, she will just grow, and become brighter than ever.